My year 5 storys

1. Look Out

" Ok ok its not that bad almost there close naa I can't do it its to dreadfull. I hear screaming from were i'm standing "
"aggh who pushed me where am I I'm in a room of kids".
"Hay you wanna play with my snuggle buggle". said a little 5 year old.
"This has not happened a metre away from the door i'll make a run while i can".
Tom creeped closer to the door when a man came in with hair as brown as a bears closed eyelid hang on noa bears soft wooley coat he was the new princible I crept behind him opened the door and ran for my life.
When I bumped into Patrica Corts my crush
"hi" she said and you know what I did I just stood there with a grin I wish I did because now she probaly think I am a dork and Jake my best friend and I think he likes her but is afraid to admitt it.

The End
( do you think its good I will continue writing this after I get your opinions)